{Susan Allibone Project} proofread chapter 23 + help me with the spine
We are up to chapter 23 of 26! Can you help me by reading the chapter and noting any typos for me? I’ve uploaded it onto Google Docs here.
ALSO! I’d love your thoughts on which version of the spine you like best. (Ignore the light red marks and background stuff, that’s all part of formatting it correctly).
Which style do you like on the spine?
The top one has no color block behind the silhouette, the middle has a light block and the bottom has a darker block. Which do you prefer? Leave your thoughts in the comments below!
Also, even if you haven’t proofread up until now, you can still jump in and read this chapter for me and note any typos or unclear words, etc. Click here to help proofread.
Thank you so much for all your help!
Light block is what my eyes are drawn to, but when I actually read the spine, my eyes prefer no block at all–so that’s my vote, no block.
I agree. No block
I also am drawn to the simple look of “no block”. The color behind it makes it look too busy or chunky.
No block is simple and a clean pure look.
I like the dark block. It coordinates with the curtains on the cover and draws my attention.
I like the Dark Block. It goes great with the whole book cover.
No block gets my vote.
Agree with no block comments. I like the look, but when looking/reading as a whole, no block seems to work better.
light gets my vote
No block
No block.
The block seems to interrupt the eye’s journey down the spine. I vote no block.
When it’s spine-out on the shelf, I think the light block captures my attention.
Light block
I prefer the no block.
My first thought was no block. Second choice was light block. Overall I agree with no block.
no block, and if you think of this on a bookshelf, THAT is what will pop!